Mr Darcy’s Persuasion – Chapter Twenty-Three

Posted on 17/01/2021 by Cass

Chapter Twenty-Three

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24 Responses to Mr Darcy’s Persuasion – Chapter Twenty-Three

  1. Interestsofajaneaustengirl says:
    17/01/2021 at 2:52 pm

    Omg he’s a awake, but does not remember, don’t know if it’s positive or not… especially for Anne!?!
    And I’m SO ready to hit the Elliot family over the head with a big stick! Don’t they get it yet?! Make Darcy lash out, beat Sir Walter, anything than go along with this farce it’s too much to handle for us readers especially since none of us like the Elliot family besides Anne!
    Please keep posting this is amazing and getting more and more interesting

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    • Cass says:
      17/01/2021 at 4:36 pm

      LOL – no, it’s hard to tell if it’s a good or bad thing for Anne! But hey, you didn’t think we’d make this straight-forward, did you? 😆

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  2. Jennifer Redlarczyk says:
    17/01/2021 at 2:58 pm

    Happily the captain is awake. I hope Darcy is not coerced by Elliot and I hope Anne and the captain can work it out. Would love another conversation between D&E.

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  3. cassandrableigh says:
    17/01/2021 at 3:02 pm

    I’m glad Frederick is awake and talking. Now they can proceed with their betrothal, even if it is only in his faulty memory.
    I suspect Sir Awful is not the clever mastermind he thinks he is. Darcy will figure out how to overset him.

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    • Cass says:
      17/01/2021 at 4:38 pm

      Sir Awful 🤣 You make me laugh!

      Yes, at some point, the rather full of himself baronet is due a fall. Let’s hope it’s Darcy’s foot that trips him!

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    • Isa says:
      18/01/2021 at 12:39 am

      I keep thinking that Darcy is in love with an Elizabeth. Seems like it would be easy enough for a “mistake” to be made somehow. But if in the mean time the ickyElizabeth and her gross blackmailing daddy are welcome to fall in a very large hole and just..stay there.

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  4. sheilalmajczan says:
    17/01/2021 at 3:05 pm

    Well, at least Anne may proceed with some happiness. I am sure they are going to sort it all out and they are together. However, there is still the corner Darcy has been forced into. I cannot imagine how you are going to write him out of that but I am sure of a HEA. Thanks for this chapter.

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    • Cass says:
      17/01/2021 at 4:39 pm

      Yes, you can rely on us for a HEA! We may put Darcy through the mill to get there, but then, it wouldn’t be half so satisfying, would it?

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  5. Glynis says:
    17/01/2021 at 4:49 pm

    Thank goodness the Captain woke and is happy to see Anne. I do wonder what Georgiana was going to say to Elizabeth? I wish she could learn the truth and I certainly hope she stays there.
    Darcy should refuse to spend any time with Elliot and his despicable daughter! I do hope the Colonel arrives soon and can help!

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  6. Kim P. says:
    17/01/2021 at 4:58 pm

    Another great chapter. I’m so glad to see the Captain awake and in love with Anne. I hope Darcy gets out of this engagement scam soon. Hopefully the Colonel will arrive and have some dirt on the Elliots that will make them back down. I can’t imagine Darcy engaged to the wrong Elizabeth!

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  7. Cristina says:
    17/01/2021 at 6:09 pm

    I am so happy for Anne. They will have their HEA. I also long for more interaction between D&E.
    Thank you for these chapters. Cannot wait for the whole book

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  8. Bonnie K. says:
    17/01/2021 at 8:00 pm

    Hope is in the air. I wonder how Darcy will get out from under Sir Walter.

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  9. Deborah says:
    17/01/2021 at 11:43 pm

    So much is going down!
    I’m glad that Anne and Cap W had a loving reunion no matter if/when he regains memory of their estrangement.

    Georgiana’s low spirits are turning, but the exchange seems to be decidedly worse😮 And how enlightening to an angry Darcy to hear the disgusting Sir Walter voice his snobbish view of EB’s standing. Views certainly more prideful, but not so entirely far from what his own had been.
    Great chapter!

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  10. isa says:
    18/01/2021 at 12:35 am

    The 23rd is SO. FAR. AWAY. I mean. In case yall didnt know.

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  11. Cynthia Donovan says:
    22/01/2021 at 6:20 pm

    We need the Colonel!! Love this! Love the cover!! Can we pre-order?

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    • Cass says:
      23/01/2021 at 1:22 pm

      Your wish is my command, Cynthia! Chapter Twenty-Four now up! Glad you love the cover. Pre-order will be available in a day or so!

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